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Defamiliarisation is the technique of making something familiar unfamiliar. Of approaching a well-known event, subject, or item as though you’ve never experienced it before. When you do this in your writing, you can take something that your readers are familiar with but give them a whole new experience of that concept. This is a handy technique when you want readers to question their perceptions.

Here, I’ll share two defamiliarisation techniques to help you breathe life into your writing.

Defamiliarisation technique 1: reversal

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Defamiliarisation is all about challenging both your and your readers’ deepest assumptions about your characters and settings. One of the simplest ways to do this is to make some assumptions about your character, setting, or plot and then reverse these.

For example, your character might be an engineer. You might make these three assumptions about your engineer:

  1. She trained in engineering.
  2. She earns money for her engineering work.
  3. She fixes cars.

But what if you reversed these traits? What if your engineer didn’t have any training, worked for free, and didn’t know how to fix cars? What story would you have to tell then? Perhaps your engineer works in a scrap metal yard and tears cars apart, using the materials to build shelters for the homeless. 

You can try this same technique with your settings. Perhaps your story takes place in a café. You might make three assumptions about the café: 

  1. It serves customers.
  2. The chef prepares food.
  3. It advertises itself online.

So, if you reverse these assumptions, you have a café that doesn’t provide food, doesn’t serve customers, and doesn’t advertise. What plot ideas could this lead to?

This defamiliarisation technique allows you to think provocatively and find breakthroughs in your writing that resonate with your theme and illuminate your characters/settings.

Defamiliarisation technique 2: random metaphor

Here’s a second technique to defamiliarise your readers, this time by taking a stereotypical character and giving them depth. This technique helps you craft original characters that have inner conflict, which can make them more interesting and authentic.

First, come up with a character that lacks dimension – a flat, 2D character. (You might already have one in the cast of your WIP.) For example, your character might be a good-looking, confident athlete. ‘Good-looking’ and ‘confident’ are two adjectives that come to mind immediately for a stereotypical athlete. 

Then, choose a random object. Ask someone to pick one for you or use an online random noun finder if the choice feels too wide. 

Now, look for similarities between your character and the object. This should help you see your character in a new way.

For example, your random object might be a rowing boat. In this case, you could think of all the adjectives you might use to describe a boat. Perhaps ‘wooden’, ‘romantic’, ‘unstable’, and ‘historic’. What if your character becomes all of those things? How might they gain depth? Rather than using these words to directly describe your character, think about the things they can do and say that demonstrate these traits.

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Defamiliarisation and Viktor Shklovsky

The concept of defamiliarisation dates back to the Russian Formalists, most notably Viktor Shklovsky, who coined the term in his Art as Technique. The artistic technique hasn’t dated in literature and is still effective today. Apply it early in your planning process to create characters and settings that feel fresh, genuine, and unique.

About Charlotte

Charlotte McCormac | Line Editor | Copyeditor | Content Writer | Shrewsbury | Oswestry

Charlotte is an award-winning writer and line/copyeditor who writes and edits for clients all over the world. She also works on the fiction team for Ambit, a UK literary and arts magazine. 

She holds an international literary prize from Hammond House Publishing Group, two writing-related degrees, various marketing certifications, and training certificates from the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading, of which she is a Professional Member.

Charlotte’s work has appeared in several anthologies, magazines, and literary journals, including IndigomaniaDream Catcher, and The Curlew

She has also created a series of free self-editing cheat sheets to help new writers hone their fiction before sending their work off to a professional editor.

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