Uncategorised6 things to get right in your novel's opening chapters | The Editing Lounge

Writing a novel is a massive undertaking, regardless of how many books you’ve already written. And, no matter how many how-to books you’ve read and how many fiction workshops you’ve attended, it’s easy to miss the fundamentals when writing your opening chapters.

When you submit your novel to an agent or publisher, they will almost certainly only read the first three chapters (and they might well put your manuscript down before they reach that point) before they decide whether to move forward with you. So, your initial chapters need to be outstanding.

Here, I’ll help you make sure you don’t waste your time by showing you the most important elements to get into the first few chapters of your novel.

1. Set up a compelling protagonist

First, it’s essential that you introduce readers to a protagonist that they can bond with. 

This doesn’t mean your protagonist has to be likeable, but they do have to be engaging, interesting, and compelling.

Your reader needs to get to know this protagonist within the first page or two. It’s usually a good idea to start your novel with a scene that your protagonist is in so you can introduce them to your readers right away. (There are exceptions to this, but it’s a good rule of thumb if you’re not an experienced writer).

Remember: it doesn’t matter how good your plot is if your characters fall flat, especially your protagonist.

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2. Highlight the protagonist's core need

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It’s vital that you make your protagonist’s life situation and core need clear. 

This might sound obvious, but many writers don’t understand exactly what their protagonist needs. Not knowing this can leave you replotting huge chunks of your novel later.

So, start the novel in the middle of an event that reveals your protagonist’s living situation, their immediate problems, their lifestyle, their wants, their needs, and their fears.

3. Launch the inciting incident

Then, follow up with an inciting incident. This should take place within the first 10% of the novel. 

A strong inciting incident will give your readers a solid reason to care about your character and what happens to them. And it will provide the basis for essential change, which will drive your plot.

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4. Introduce supporting characters

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From here, you can extend your focus to introduce other characters. These people should populate your protagonist’s world and share important relationships with them.

Supporting characters may include family members, friends, love interests, colleagues, and rivals. Each character should have a unique personality and voice.

5. Raise the stakes

One of the best ways to keep readers interested is to keep raising the stakes.

The higher the stakes for your character, the more likely your readers will care about them. 

But the stakes do need to be believable and appropriate. So, you can make your story more gripping by adding additional conflict, but only if you do so in an authentic manner. 

(There’s no room for pointless violence and danger with no context and backstory!)

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6. Put the protagonist's goal in sight

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Your first few chapters might be enough to get readers a quarter of the way through your book. By this 25% point, readers need to know what the protagonist’s goal is. What are they working towards? If it’s not clear, your novel will likely lack direction. 

So, trade in your random events and interchanges for chapters that each advance the plot and characters. If you finish a chapter that doesn’t drive the story forward, it’s time to go back and rethink.

Why your opening chapters are so important

Your opening chapters are essentially a litmus test for anyone who’s thinking about publishing or representing your work. If there are flaws in these chapters, readers will know there are more flaws to come.

It takes serious training and support to write a good novel. If you need help, take a look at my line editing service.

About Charlotte

Charlotte McCormac | Line Editor | Copyeditor | Content Writer | Shrewsbury | Oswestry

Charlotte is an award-winning writer and line/copyeditor who writes and edits for clients all over the world. She also works on the fiction team for Ambit, a UK literary and arts magazine. 

She holds an international literary prize from Hammond House Publishing Group, two writing-related degrees, various marketing certifications, and training certificates from the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading, of which she is a Professional Member.

Charlotte’s work has appeared in several anthologies, magazines, and literary journals, including IndigomaniaDream Catcher, and The Curlew

She has also created a series of free self-editing cheat sheets to help new writers hone their fiction before sending their work off to a professional editor.

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